Hi
everyone !!!
Last month,
I went to Australia for 3 weeks for visiting the country.
First,
with this blog, I want to show you how beautiful this country is.
Australians are very sympathetic and they love their country. In my different hotels, nobody disturbed me and I love this
for my holidays
5/25/2012
I arrived
in Australia by boat, in Darwin, the 25th of May 2012. This
city is very impressive because it had a big beach. It was the first I’ve ever seen. I stayed 2 days in this city because their are lots
of things to do !
I saw
a lot of crocodiles around Darwin city.
5/27/2012
To continue
my trip, I went to Katherine’s waterfalls. Katherine is the city
which is on the road between Darwin and Alice Springs. It was also my
point of rest between these 2 cities.
The Katherine waterfalls are in Nitmiluk
National Park. It is the most
popular attraction for tourists who coming to Australia like me. I took the boat which showed us the insides of the waterfalls and I got
sick
6/3/2012
In one week,
I have seen a lot of things in Australia. First, when I arrived in
Alice Springs city, I had forgotten the name of my hotel, but
fortunately, I recorded the hotel’s cellular number in mine. Alice
Springs is a big city where there are lots of things to do such as visits,…
Before to go
in Woomera. In Woomera, I’ve seen a Restricted/forbidden military
area. One day later, I arrived at Port Aucusta.
Here, I took a little private boat and I sailed on the Southern Ocean. I took this boat to go to King Island and
after that, to continue my trip.
When
I arrived in King Island port, my host family met me. King Island
is very strange because nobody, not even a tourist, ever comes here. But
this island is exotic in comparison with Australia because its climate is more
pleasant.
6/17/2012
During the last
week, I visited a lot of cities, like Broken Hill or Wagga Wagga
(not the spiders) and more. But all of them were fascinating. I
took the plane inAdelaide.
My trip was
exciting and I have learned a lot of customs from the Australian people.
I will never forget my trip because of the landscapes and the people. I would
have liked to stay in this country, but I prefer to return to my home
because here, there are not big BIG spiders or crocodiles.
I hope you write soon, bye
A.Fmwtks
Hi Aymeric,
ReplyDeleteGood work!
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