~Melbourne trip!~
Hey everybody! Three weeks ago I went around the world. My family and I went to New
York, Los Angeles, Moscow, Beijing, Melbourne, Paris and Algiers. This trip was
unique!
The city that I preferred
was Melbourne. We stayed 4 days.
We decided to spoke
about Melbourne because this city is the capital oh fashion, culture and sport.
19 /05/2013
We went to watch a
tennis match during the Australian Open. It was fantastic. I saw the Spanish Raphael Nadal, Roger Federer, and the
French Joe Wilfred Tsonga. There was a very good ambiance, everybody cries, it
was very funny.
We spent the night at the hotel Charsfield. This is a three-star hotel
located 3 minutes from downtown Melbourne.
20/05/2013
After this first day,
we were a little bit tired so we decided to use the city circle tram. An audio commentary provides details of city landmarks and major
attractions such as the City Museum, Parliament House, Docklands, Federation
Square, Melbourne Aquarium and the Princess Theatre.
It was funny and relaxing.
21/05/2013
In 1956, Melbourne welcomed the Olympics’ game.
So there was beautiful infrastructure. We maked a lot photos. The Australian were
very user-friendly. At midday we ate in a family restaurant. We ate a specialty: the meat pie. There is pastry with kangaroo meat. It's very
good !
22/05/21013
It was the last day, so we didn’t left Australia
without saw a race. I had never in my life saw a car race, it is very
impressive. I had see Michael Schumacher, Fernando Alonso, Lewis Hamilton and
Damon Hill.
Good bye !
Alicia
ROUX
Hi Alicia, good post!
ReplyDeleteI've highlighted in yellow everything that needs correction. Look at the tenses, you made a lot of (too many!) mistakes with the past tense! In green what I've added, this is already corrected but I wanted you to see the difference with what you wrote earlier. Please correct and update! Thanks, Mrs Baldwin
robert et rudolphe
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