~Melbourne trip!~

The city that I preferred
was Melbourne. We stayed 4 days.
We decided to spoke
about Melbourne because this city is the capital oh fashion, culture and sport.
19 /05/2013
We went to watch a
tennis match during the Australian Open. It was fantastic. I saw the Spanish Raphael Nadal, Roger Federer, and the
French Joe Wilfred Tsonga. There was a very good ambiance, everybody cries, it
was very funny.

20/05/2013
After this first day,
we were a little bit tired so we decided to use the city circle tram. An audio commentary provides details of city landmarks and major
attractions such as the City Museum, Parliament House, Docklands, Federation
Square, Melbourne Aquarium and the Princess Theatre.
It was funny and relaxing.
21/05/2013

22/05/21013

Good bye !
Alicia
ROUX
Hi Alicia, good post!
ReplyDeleteI've highlighted in yellow everything that needs correction. Look at the tenses, you made a lot of (too many!) mistakes with the past tense! In green what I've added, this is already corrected but I wanted you to see the difference with what you wrote earlier. Please correct and update! Thanks, Mrs Baldwin
robert et rudolphe
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